My EOTC writing

On Friday we were in a hurry to package goodies to the retirement village. When we got there I heard barking coming from inside while the class waited outside the village. Then I talked to a few people but I was really shy. Then the people who took care of the residents gave the class something to eat. Then after we ate we danced then after all that we went back with a treat that one of the people that took care of the residents gave us. Then we went to the pools and we got to learn about being safe around rips, ( my favourite part ) using life jackets and water safety. After that we went back to school and when we came back school finished.