Once upon a world there was an old man living in the clouds with his grandson. They shared lots of times together but the most special one was when the boy did something that made the grandpa happy. So let me tell you that story. Once upon a world ( yet again ) the grandpa and his grandson were living in the clouds and the grandpa was a cloud blower. Cloud blowers are the ones who make clouds up in the sky and the grandpa wanted his grandson to show him how to be a cloud blower. So he pulled out his cloud blowing stick and showed the kid how to do it. WHOOSH!!! The stick yelled as the grandpa blew out a cloud into the sky"Ooooh! Lemme try!" said the grandson as he grabbed the stick so he could try. But when he tryed to do it he only blew out a little little cloud that only stayed in the sky for ten seconds until it vanished like the wind. The grandpa was astonished that his grandson couldn't do it so he told him to blow like an elephant sneezing so the grandson tryed. But when he did it it didn't work so he kept grabbing it and pulling it but then' the kid pushed it on the ground with him on it ! " Are you alright?'" the grandpa said as he picked him up but then he was shocked to see that when the grandson fell on it he actually bent the stick!
Then his grandson tryed to fix it but he made worse! But then he had an idea so he got the stick and bent the top into a star! then his grandpa blew out of the stick then a star cloud came out! He was astonished! So he gave it to his grandson to do another one then he made a bunny cloud! then the grandpa made a love heart stick then the grandson blew it out. Then they sat down and hugged.
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I liked reading your story, Maire! I wonder if you need to make the font bigger as it was really hard to read with the font you are using?
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